What I want to share is one of his assignments, which was completed as this video - which is really about the writing process. Since we have studied and often use the writing process, I thought you might enjoy this video.
How do people make videos like this? Can they really draw that fast?
Post a comment about at least one thing you learned from this video.
Tr. Derek
Need to write a list what I am doing.
ReplyDeleteEsther
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ReplyDeleteOh now i know how write writing process animation ?
ReplyDeleteALE
Mr. Jon is definitely not only a good writer, but also an fantastic and creative artist. This video is absolutely a helpful one, but it made me understand that being a good writer takes time and practice, moreover patience. Especially in Chinese, when we have to do more strokes for each character. I wish we would have enough time to research for information before we start drafting, then we would also need enough time to revise, which is not proofreading at all.
ReplyDeleteEugenia
1.writing is a skill
ReplyDelete2. if you practice or effort your writing will be improved
3.He said first he will do when he start writing is "get comfy" -->"reduce distractions"
4.Many people forgot to "PLAN" frist
5.make a timeline-->select a topic--> create a outline
6.timeline-"plan" "research" "write" and "revise"
7.He is going to set a goal for himself
Tiffany
I learned that when we are writing first we need to plan.
ReplyDeleteHelen
And we need to write the draft,too.
I think that he should'nt use wikipedia as a research source. I learned that the writing process is really slow, but in class it always feels really fast. Though I know we cut off the research, probably because we write our thoughts or myths, so we don't need research. It be nice if we could do research though. A: 1. Mr. Jon is good at drawing, he probably taped his drawing first, then later just sped it up. 2. Tape yourself drawing slowly, then later speed it up and talk at the same time, them put it on youtube.
ReplyDeleteChloe
I learned that we need to first plan and draft. And you need a quiet space and nothing that distract you and work on it!
ReplyDeletejustin
ReplyDeleteI learned you need no distractions in the room you work on your writing, you need to first plan, research, draft then revise. I also think he is a good artist, but I don't know how much time he used in drawing all of that, since the video is already that long when he already fast forwarded.
ReplyDeleteOwewewewezai(Owen)
effort and practice=IMPROVED WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PRACTICES MAKES BETTER
ReplyDeleteBRANDON
I learn we need to plan the thing that you are going to do and I learn we need be a planer that can help you over a life .
ReplyDeleteJames
i learned that if you list down the things your going to do, it makes you more organize and you can remember it easily. listing down your goals is also important, because if you list it down you have something to look at and do the task. but if u don't list it down you will forget your goals and not able to do the task. listing down things is very important!
ReplyDeleteExcellent comments 5i,
ReplyDeleteI can see that you all already have some well developed writing skills. Tiffany, excellent comment this time, I can see that you were really watching closely. Lets apply these ideas to our next writing assignment.
tr Derek
you can draw some picture and write writes.writting is a skill so we can impreve if we pratice to write quick.
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