Monday 19 March 2012

Mythologies: "The Superman" - Justin

 THE SUPERMAN

A long time ago, in a small village a boy went out to play. His name was called Superman, he was really smart and he went to a dark forest. 

When he was walking he heard a sound, when he ran there he saw a little dragon and it was red. It looked like the dragon was hurt. Superman took him home and took care of him. 

Superman’s parents are dead when he was small, they were killed by Owen and Ale, they are evil, bad, and like to kill people. And so Superman promised he will kill them, Superman had a friend called JJ. He was good and kind. 

The little dragon became bigger and bigger and Superman called him Fire. Just when he was happy about his pet. The TV said the village had a one-eyed monster, Superman, JJ, Fire went out to fight with the monster. 

The monster was big, Superman used his fist to punched  him and JJ too. And Fire went to baked and used Fire to burn the monster , and they fought and fought. At last they won, and everyone was very happy.

And he heard people talking about where is Owen’s castle. Superman thought about how Owen killed her mom and dad, so he followed the road and Superman, JJ, and Fire walked and walked. At last they came to a mountain. 

Suddenly a big dragon came and stopped them going across the mountain. The dragon said’’ If you want to go over the mountain you need to fight and beat me.’’ Superman, JJ, and Fire had no choose. So they fought with the dragon the dragon is too big and the fire is too strong. And Superman saw another dragon was walking. And he had a idea. He told JJ and Fire to let the dragon chase them and that the dragon to bump into the other dragon and they will fight and Superman and JJ can run away. So the dragon chased JJ and Fire, and they smashed together and there was a loud BOOM!!!. The two dragon were very angry with each other so they fought together. 

And Superman. JJ. and Fire safely across ed the mountain. At night they fell asleep. When Superman woke up, its still night suddenly he saw a lighting little ball. He picked it up and it was a magic ball. 

WOW! Superman was so happy, because the magic ball can gave person magic power. So Superman, JJ,p and Fire all had magic power and they kept walking  to Owen’s castle. After days and days they came to Owen’s castle. Superman said ‘’ It is the time to fight with Owen and Ale. In this fight we can’t lose.’’ And they went in to the castle. It had some little monster but they are easy to beat, because they had magic power. At last they found Owen and Ale. Owen said’’ Ha!!! It is the time to beat you, if you want your life , just come and surrender. Superman said’’ No, I will not surrender, come and fight.’’ 

They fought and fought each other is was tie. It was very scary. Suddenly, Owen used a fire ball to hit Superman. ‘’Ah~~~~’’ said Superman. He had a big cut. But he didn’t give up her used the last power to fight. A big strong gold dragon just came out and fly to the sky. Go to dea! The gold dragon charge forward and and BOOM!!!!
the castle is broken and Owen and Ale is dead. And they went home and all of the people is very happy and the world is on peace


                                                   THE END      

7 comments:

  1. YOU SHOULD MAKE ANOTHER BOOK!!!!!
    brandon

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  2. It was a great story but you can write it more interesting

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  3. I like your ending Good story I like it
    Helen

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  4. HA HA HA!!! so funny, owen and ale killed supermans parents. Omg, this is hilarious!!!
    Chloe

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  5. I think your story is very great, and I really like your ending, but I have a question:are there any bad monster come out again or it just end like that, because I think the world won't be peace they will have war?
    Tiffany

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  6. it is a good story and you can let it more better.

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  7. Did Ale and Owen die or superman die ?
    I like your story and most I like is your ending!!!

    Ale

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